Wordy
It's good discipline to edit out unnecessary words in your writing. You don't want to bury your ideas in words that don't contribute to meaning. To avoid wordiness
- use concrete nouns and vivid verbs
- avoid empty words, such as "aspect," "case," "factor," "field," "kind," "situation," "thing," "type"
- substitute single words for wordy phrases (e.g., use "because," not "due to the fact that")
- cut out unnecessary repetition (e.g., "return again," cooperate together")
- avoid beginning too many sentences with "there is" or "it is " (or "there are," "there were," etc.)
- combine sentences to avoid repeating words.
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